Rescue Me

Oct. 30th, 2008 06:54 pm
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Title Rescue Me
Author:[livejournal.com profile] magser 
Chapter:2/?
Wordcount this chapter: 1,358
Disclaimer: Sadly I dont own them, I wish to god I did, but alas,no... except Mark, I do however very shamefaced admit to making this guy up in my very sadly and warped mind!
Summary: What happens when Jareds once stable but cold ex-husband goes over the edge? How does Jensen prevent him from destroying the man he loves? What do you do when your actions help a warped man put Jared away for a long time?
Authors Note: I can honestly say with the advice and guidance and patience and bullying reading over of my stuff and constantly reassuring me that i wont get laughed off of LJ land by [livejournal.com profile] garvaldmains  , [livejournal.com profile] bellasianna  for her support and the idea bouncing, [livejournal.com profile] alena2b  for her unwavering support even when she hates what ive done to the boys, and [livejournal.com profile] nascentproselyt  for being at times a tough critic... this story and the others would not be here.... so I thank each and every one of you for reading and commenting and it means a lot.... Oh and just to add... if this sucks? Its all [livejournal.com profile] garvaldmains  fault cause she made me write in the first place! so there, blame appropriately portioned out!


One hour after leaving the courtroom, Mark Peters was sitting at a desk in his hotel room, writing out a substantial cheque. Finishing off the signature with a flourish he handed it over to the waiting Father and son;

‘’Consider this a bonus, you two played the game to perfection, a job well done!’’

Colin White looked anxiously up at his father who hadn’t made a move to take the cheque, before turning to Mark;

‘’It’s just that you said he wouldn’t go to jail mister, you said you just wanted to teach him a lesson, he wasn’t sposed to get sent to prison or nothing!’’

Colin’s father, whose name Mark couldn’t even recall at that moment shuffled his feet and clutched his sons shoulders in front of him, as if leaning on them, even though at seventeen the son was already almost his fathers height.

‘’Sir, we appreciated the offer of the money to help my wife sir, and we appreciated the fancy doctors in California, and the money you have already transferred to our account is enough for us to live on for a very long time, but you never said nothing about an innocent man goin’ to jail, not Mr Jared sir.’’

Mark smiled viciously at both men in front of him, ‘’Come on now, please don’t tell me you are both really playing this angle with me? You both agreed to this, you both lied to the police, you both filed false accusations, you both took that stand and lied to a Judge and Jury, and now you decide to grow a conscience? Come now... we all knew where this was going to go, please don’t try and insult me now by deciding to play dumb, you both stand to spend a hell of a long time in prison for this as it is...We all got what we wanted from this ok? Jared is where he is going to learn very quickly that I’m the lesser of a hell of a lot of evils, and you guys have got the best of the best of doctors to help with your wife’s illness.’’

He rose from the chair and moved to sit on the edge of the desk facing both men, he made a very imposing figure and he knew it.

‘’I don’t even plan on letting him there that long, I promise.... I will arrange for a flaw in the judgement to arise when the time is right, and Jared will be safe and sound back here with me... ‘’

He smiled again, the smile never reaching his eyes and continued;

‘’Look you don’t want to go backing out on me now, as I’ve already told you, you will spend a hell of a lot longer in prison than I will I can assure you, so, why don’t you both run along, I have taken the liberty of having your house locked up and on the market and where you are heading, none of Jareds friends will find you.’’

He held out his hand in a manner that they knew meant business, shook hands briefly and ushered them out the door.

Once he was alone he sank down onto the bed with a glass of whiskey and smiled to himself. God but that had turned out better than he could ever have thought! Finding that kid had been a stroke of pure luck on his last visit to try and talk sense into Jared. Kid had obviously had a pretty bad day, and one look at him had told Mark he was vulnerable, and ripe for moulding, and a plan had suddenly taken route. A sympathetic conversation and the hinting of the fact that Jared was his Husband and the kid spilled the lot, his past and how ill his mother had taken, and how without the proper treatment she would be dead within months. After that it was just a walk in the park.

Mark had enough money and knew enough of the right people to listen to the kid, and to act faster than normal. Jared had been arrested very publicly and held from that day on without bail until the trial. That had been four months ago, four months rotting in a prison cell wondering what the fuck had happened and why that kid had lied, that is until the day he had seen Mark take the stand for the prosecution, they had little to no concrete evidence except for the word of the kid and his father, and Mark had played the aggrieved and hurt Husband to perfection. The tears on the stand as he spoke of Jareds betrayal, about how he had gone and begged him to come home, even though Jared had hit him on several occasions, and thanks to Chris and Jensen striking him those times he had provided picture proof of Jareds violent behaviour when provoked.

So it had been very easy after that to convince a Jury, that a man of Jareds size could have a temper that had stricken fear into the heart of the vulnerable teenager as he had molested him on several occasions and then the final act of attempted rape, that the kid had been too afraid to report until then. The look of confusion on Jareds face had been priceless as he had watched Mark talk, his features turning to shock and anger as the lies unfolded, but the look of helpless rage on the face of his friends Chris’ when he had realised that Mark had used his actions to bury Jared was one he would relish for a long long time. The bar tender hadn’t fared much better, in fact he had been quite amusing when he had stood up and announced to the courtroom that it was in fact he who had hit Mark that day, not Jared, and Mark had simply sighed and shot a very brilliant sympathetic look Jensens way and announced to the prosecutor how Jensen was practically a mirror image of himself, trying to defend Jareds actions, even covering up for him. Mark smiled to himself at the memory, ahh yes, he had enough to keep him going for a long long time. Now all he had to do was wait, wait until the time was right, Jared had been discredited good and proper now, no one would be listening to his version of events any time soon. Jared would be sentenced in two weeks time, and then he had paid the judge well to have Jared sent to the worst most filthy, vile prison he could get him into, give Jared some time there as some fatso’s bitch and he wouldn’t be so eager to turn his nose up at Mark then. Then maybe he would arrange for Jareds release and maybe, depending on if Jared survived that long, maybe he would take him home.... maybe... or maybe he would leave him there, really all depended on how damaged he was by then... hmmm... he could maybe arrange for the right ‘roomie’ for Jared, to give him enough to break Jared but not disfigure him....

Hey, maybe he would even give that bar tender of Jareds a go, must be some fuck to have given Jared the set of balls he had grown, and anyone could be bought, and he was pretty damn sure that bar tender would do anything for Jared... anyway, he would keep his options open, he had time.

Never let it be said that Mark Peters didn’t fix his mistakes, he had made a huge mistake throwing Jared out, had never realised the valuable asset he was, but he was fixing that now, and it would look just perfect when he was seen to take his convict of a husband back into his arms after spending time in prison.

Mark sighed happily, all had pretty much turned out better than he could have hoped for, he had just started out wanting Jared silenced so as not to do any damage to Marks career, but the way this had gone? He couldn’t have planned it better.

Mark was safe.



chapter 3




Date: 2008-10-30 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snfan7797.livejournal.com
Man, this guy is twisted!
He thinks he can get Jared back after sending him to prison?
Or that he has a chance with Jensen? No way.
They'd kill him first.
Love this story. Can't wait for more.

Date: 2008-10-30 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snfan7797.livejournal.com
Hey, I was first!
Cool beans!!

Date: 2008-10-30 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thing with Mark is... the more satisfaction he gets from beating Jared down, the more powerful he is feeling and the more he wants to do it. but by involving other people he has begun a dangerous game...

Date: 2008-10-30 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Damn Mark, he needs to be thrown into the prison he's trying to send Jared to. I hope Colin and his Dad come clean about what they have done and why and get Jared out of there. *hudes Jensen* from Mark.

Loved it, see you're being a tease again with the chapter 3! I want it now LOL

*smishes*

Date: 2008-10-30 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Im glad you are liking it, for some reason im very very nervous about this fic....its good to hear its going down well.

Date: 2008-10-30 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Awww don't be nervous, it's really good and I'm sure you'll get the boys back together, you better! heehee:D

Date: 2008-10-30 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
*kills Mark more than I did in my comment last chapter*
But, we'll have to see, cause Mark must be leaving a paper trail of his transactions, paying people off like that.
He really is twisted, but why would he think that taken Jared back as a convict would work for him, because all those assets he's talking about will mean nothing to anyone if they think Jared's a paedophile. They may think better of Mark for taking him back but that's about as far as it could go, but then again, you're very clever and could come up with something brilliant once again.
I love that Mark's thinking of trying to get with Jensen, using his love of Jared to sleep with him, very sadistic, would be one more way to break them.
Absolutely brilliant. Can't wait for more.
Poor Jared, and everyone else.
*hugs*

Date: 2008-10-30 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
It just shows you how Mark is slipping.... in his mind he hasnt thought past the fact of what he has had Jared convicted of... he just sees how much of a hero and a great man he would look if he was seen to forgive.
He is extremely twisted and i think may be losing his grip on reality slowely...
Thank you for the comments... it is really helping me ..

Date: 2008-10-30 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
Helping? Me? Awesome, go me, lol. :D
You're writing a brilliant story, I am so very very hooked and biting at the bit for more.
I'm glad my musings don't bother you, I just have to think out loud (or on the computer, either way) sometimes. ;)

Date: 2008-10-30 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yes you!Everytime someone comments it helps, and your musings dont bother me in the slightest, they make me think and it is awesome to be able to go back over the chapter and see what you are talking about and believe it or not i get ideas...

Date: 2008-10-30 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
That's really cool :D

Date: 2008-10-30 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaredluver1108.livejournal.com
excellent chapter
can't wait to read some more
plz update soon :)

Date: 2008-10-30 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you. Im so glad your enjoying it!

Date: 2008-10-30 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I am horrified from reading this!!

Mark just have to be the biggest sickest sociopath that I have ever had the pleasure of hating!!!!!!!

I am surprised of the length that he will go to to get revenge, and he was the one that threw Jared out in the first place!!

And if he think he can do anything with Jensen, he deserves to get hit again.

Jensen or Chris or whoever better get Jared out of that jail now!!!

AND YOU MISSY BETTER FIX THE LINK TO CHAPTER 3 NOW, BEFORE I BLOW SOMETHING INSIDE MY BRAIN!!!

♥big hugs♥
This is some amazing writing;)

Date: 2008-10-30 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Totally, he is completely twisted and whats scary is the more I write him the more twisted and unhinged he seems to become, cause he seems to be able to justify everything he does!
He is scaring even me and I made him up!
And thank you so much for saying you like this! I love to see I am doing this right....

Date: 2008-10-30 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowwolf5.livejournal.com
you know what? Chris should totally kill him and hide the body. I'll gladly help.
Excellent chapter, hun! Loving this!

Date: 2008-10-30 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Ya know... as soon as i know how I get to deal with the man I will let you know!At the moment he is running riot all over my fic and causing mayhem!

Date: 2008-10-30 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowwolf5.livejournal.com
LOL! okay (:

Date: 2008-10-30 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I was wondering which way you were gonna go with this. If you were going to shift us back to the beginning of the whole mess, or continue on from the verdict and fill in the blanks as you went. This has a urgent feel to it, worrying and really kind of knowing that Jared might not get help before he gets transferred to prison.
I'm really loving just how evil minded Mark is and at the moment, I'm ready to hire a hit man to get rid of Mark myself.
I'm glad to see the kid and his dad had a little remorse for what they did to Jared but too little, too late and I'd be surprised if either of them risked jail to save Jared now.
I'm curious to see how you get Jared out of this mess and am a little worried that you don't plan to. :(
LOL...I'd like to see Mark try something with Jensen. Although I don't even really know what he'd do. I'd love to see Jensen beat Mark to a pulp but then on the other hand to save Jared Jensen may do whatever Mark wants.
Oh this is not good you have me thinking all kinds of thinky thoughts. Aack and apparently chattering up a storm...sorry about that. jen

Date: 2008-10-30 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh chat away!!Loving the thoughts, and yes it is rather urgent, cause the more Marks feels he is getting away with the more risks he is taking, and now he feels like he has Jared exactly where he wants him and can do as he likes.... he knows he cant touch Jensen yet, too surrounded by friends and family, but he feels he can get to jensen through Jared...

Date: 2008-10-30 08:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
Aww - you mentioned me! *is touched*
Sends you ♥
For the record - I love talking fic with you too :)

Now.. this chapter. Wow.
It's such a brave move having a total j2-lite chapter, especially after the first chapter being so shocking. I think you're a genius!
Mark - god I am so scared to admit this, but I am really enjoying him! In the way we used to enjoy JR in Dallas lol He's so evil and twisted! (Should I be scared he came from your brain? :P)
But saying that, no I do not want Jared hurt :( So yeah I'm joining the 'I Hate Mark' club!

I like the motivation you gave the kid for lieing, you made me feel sorry for him when I expected to be very angry.

Your plotting is very, very good honey :)

Date: 2008-10-30 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Of course i did! its has been vital to me!
And you have no idea how lost i am with this lol....I am a few chapters ahead, but... mark is starting to scare me slightly...

And I squeed when you mentioned JR Ewing!! Cause you would never guess.... but thats exactly who i have based him on!

Date: 2008-10-30 09:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
No way!
Does that make Jared... not Sue Ellen, maybe Kristin? Hehe
I loved Dallas. I blame it for my warped sense of everything. My mum used to put me ot bed and I would wait till I heard the music and then join her on the couch to watch it. I used ot think Sue Ellen was so cool when she had a drink in her hand!
See - it warped me! lmao

Date: 2008-10-30 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amtamburo.livejournal.com
OMG! All this time I was just thinking that Mark was a selfish asshole... when in fact he's a complete and total whack-job!

~sits back and waits to see what you have for us next~

Date: 2008-10-30 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
A total whack job but the kind that can justify everything he does!Which is scarier!

Date: 2008-10-30 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelgrainger2.livejournal.com
Oh m7y god this man is just off his rocker. He is just such a selfish prick. He wants to hurt Jared and jensen just to save his career and make hismelf look like an angel. I am so angry with him. I am glad to see that Colin's dad was feeling some remorse about what they did but they are in a no win situation as they could go to jail. I just hope everything works out and that Jared is not hurt at all. Poro baby needs a hug. I am so looking forward to the next part.

Date: 2008-10-30 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Lol totally and he just doesnt see the harm, in his mind he is totally justified.... scary man...

Date: 2008-10-30 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alena2b.livejournal.com
*pulls out the penguin*

*peggy gets a smack*

there!

*is feeling a tiny bit better*

Date: 2008-10-31 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Ow! *mutters* bitch......

Date: 2008-10-30 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayneeeee911.livejournal.com
Mark, give people like you enough rope and they hang themselves with it.........you is gonna be swinging buddy, the truth will out and when it does you're gonna be the one bending for the soap in the prison showers, I'd like to see you buy your way out of that one, good luck with it btw.........

Date: 2008-10-31 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Lol thank you babe.... I have no idea how Im gonna deal withhim, but Im sure it will come to me!

Date: 2008-10-31 01:25 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] angels3.livejournal.com
Chinese Torture Death of a Thousand Cuts

Thousands of tiny paper thin cuts administered over hours or days. Victim dies from blood loss and shock. If one wants to be extra malicious one can use salt or lemon juice to bath the wounds in.

Yep that's all I have to say about that!

Date: 2008-10-31 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Heheheheheeheh thats funny...

Date: 2008-10-31 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Arrogant bastard! Gonna take a while but I'm so looking forward to nasty things befalling him..so I'm trusting you to write them ;-)

Date: 2008-10-31 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
OH I will...I just havent come up with a good way for him to be caught yet!

Date: 2008-10-31 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oldbatj.livejournal.com
i'm speechless......you wicked, evil, warped wordsmith.......OMG!!!! WTF !!!!

Date: 2008-10-31 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Lol..... Thank you!More in an hour!

Date: 2008-10-31 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvenprincess78.livejournal.com
Oooh!! I just noticed there's a new chapter!! YAY!!!!!!! *clears throat* Sorry. I'm just loving this, and I squee every time I see there's an update, hehe. :) Anyway, getting very tired, so this won't be a very long comment. .. beyond my rambling, but I just had to say. . .Awesome update yet again!!! Ugh!! I just wanna do all sorts of horrible things to Mark, while at the same time wanting to just huggle Jared and Jensen and even Chris, and make everything all better!! And to protect poor sweet Jared in that prison. :( Ah well, I suppose I'll just have to wait now and see what that scumbag Mark will do to eventually screw himself over, which I'm sure he will do, right? Getting these other people involved, paying them off with a cheque that could possibly be traced, were someone to think to look into it. . .okay, so I lied about the long business. But as I'm about to fall asleep now, I'm gonna shut up. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!! And don't be so worried about this fic!! It's awesome!!!!

:)

Date: 2008-10-31 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thanks for your input, i love to read peoples thoughts on this..... Mark is gonna get caught out... just dont know how yet...

Date: 2008-10-31 07:17 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] babycin.livejournal.com
This man is crazy. I had understood before this.. but HE'S TOO CRAZY!

Date: 2008-10-31 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yup uh huh completey off his trolley!

Date: 2008-10-31 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
mark needs to die a slow torturous death

Date: 2008-10-31 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh that he does my friend... that he does...

Date: 2008-10-31 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueeyedliz.livejournal.com
Oooh Mark is so evil, love it Mags. Can't wait to read more.

Date: 2008-10-31 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay thank you babe!

Date: 2008-11-01 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mousedm.livejournal.com
I'm ready to kill him myself - nothing I hate more than the twisting of the truth. Another excellent chapter!

Date: 2010-06-02 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tough-cookie-88.livejournal.com
Mark is such a bastard! His character is brilliantly written though... So smart but so twisted! I was shaking with rage reading this!
But he will pay for this, i am sure.)

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