Prologue

Oct. 29th, 2008 05:07 pm
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This is the prologue I was telling you guys about last night, its the sequel to the fic just fnished called Release me ,its short, but gives you an idea about the state Of Marks mind and how he is thinking. I will post chapter one later this evening I promise, I just wanted ot give you guys a taste of my warped mind....

Title: Rescue Me
Prologue.
Pairings/Characters : Jared/jensen ; Chris; Steve; Jensen and Jareds Family ; J.D.M.  and others I cannot even remember right now.
Disclaimer: Sadly I dont own them, I wish to god I did, but alas,no... except Mark, I do however very shamefaced admit to making this guy up in my very sadly and warped mind!
Summary: ahhh not yet foks.... would only give the game away....
Word Count: 705
Authors Note: there are so many people to than for the encouragment, and guidance and urging and patience and just generally listening to me go  on and on and on.... you know who you are and I love you dearly, I just dont know if any of you would appreceate your names being hollared out ... hehehe... but I do love you.


 

Mark Peters was angry.

No he wasn’t just angry, he was furious!

He had periodically gone to Jared over the last six months and asked him, nicely he thought, to come back, and the stupid prick kept turning him away. He fingered the bruise just under his eye gingerly. He had gone there this morning to talk to Jared again and his lover had actually hit him! The stupid bastard had the nerve to strike him and tell him to back off and leave Jared alone, while that other asshole Chris had almost come off the stool laughing. They had laughed, laughed at him, Chris and some blonde guy, and Jared would pay for that. Granted Jared hadn’t even been there when he had gone by this time, off doing some of his ridiculous charity work with those goddamned teenagers. But Jared had to learn that letting his people run around thinking they could do what they liked would eventually fall back on him. He had gotten over the fact that Chris had hit him a few times the first time he had gone to that bar, he had expected it, and hell he even let him have those shots, least he could do... considering... But the last straw was that..... Man, thinking he could steal what belonged to him and then having the nerve to hit him while his friends looked on and laughed? Jesus didn’t Jared know he was only thinking of his future?

Jared was getting quite a bit of notice, and Mark was intrigued. It was said in his circles, which he knew were the best circles to mix in, that Jared had quite a charisma about him, people in all the right places had been eyeing Jared as he went about setting up programme after programme in schools across Texas and neighbouring states. People were falling over themselves to do what he asked of them, fucking falling over themselves to hand over their money for some ungrateful crowd of teenagers who would probably burn them in their own homes as quick as look at them, and all because Jared smiled that smile and flashed those goddamned puppy eyes. It wasn’t often, no, Mark had never admitted to making a mistake in his life, and he actually never did make mistakes, his business and his success in this business depended on it, but, damn he had made a massive one with Jared. How he had never spotted the potential in him when he had him under his roof and under his control he didn’t know... he had handled all his own clients with ease when he brought them round, he knew that. Looking back he could see that he had actually brought the most awkward of his clients to Jared to entertain and win over.... he had just never realised at the time what he had been doing. That was a mistake he wasn’t going to make again.

 Jared was getting noticed, people were starting to ask questions about him. Who was he? Where did he come from? Who are his family? And possibly the most damaging question as far as Mark was concerned was, what was Jareds history? Because that question if answered could spell disaster for Mark. If asked often enough or if someone dug deep enough, they would find out that Jared had been Marks husband, and they would want to know why they were no longer married, and what had happened... He knew he would get away with the jilted husband for bar owner lover for a while; he was damn good at persuading people too. But, mud sticks and all it would take is one damning article in the right newspaper and people would not want to touch Mark, neither socially nor in Business... So he needed to get this under control, he needed to get Jared under control, get him back here where he could keep an eye on him and maybe nudge him in the political direction and failing that... If he couldn’t get Jared under control, he would have to apply some damage control.... and as much as he hated involving others, this was serious, he needed Jared silenced.... using any means necessary.

Chapter 1







Date: 2008-10-29 05:30 pm (UTC)
ext_19186: Dean the demon hunter (Default)
From: [identity profile] candygramme.livejournal.com
I told you he should be put into some big evil dude's jail cell. Hopefully he won't cause any more damage before he gets there. What a very evil mind you have, my dear.

Also, first!

I can't believe I am ever first.

Date: 2008-10-29 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh honey *hugs you* you have absolutely no idea how close you are!
And yay for first!!

Date: 2009-11-22 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yvonnegos.livejournal.com
Oh my god, I LOVE your icon! Only in the Supernatural world would we get this kind of apocalypse huh? XP

Date: 2009-11-22 08:20 pm (UTC)
ext_19186: Dean the demon hunter (Default)
From: [identity profile] candygramme.livejournal.com
Can't wait to see what they do with God! I'm hoping it doesn't turn out to be Alanis Morisette!

Date: 2008-10-29 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Oh no! I hope Jared is watching his back and hasn't under estimated Mark!

And I hope Mark gets what he deserves, and that isn't Jared!

Looking forward to more:)

*hugs*

Date: 2008-10-29 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Just gonna post chapter 1 now!Hope its worth the wait for you!

Date: 2008-10-29 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
And that there, will be Mark's downfall.
If he starts bringing in other people, hurting Jared in ways that can be traced (and things can always be traced in some way) someone, somewhere is going to talk, or someone's going to see something they shouldn't and Mark will have some difficult questions to answer, and of course what happens when he finds he can't destroy Jared, because Jared's grown stronger without Mark around to push him down? Mark'll get angry, and desperate and sloppy, and that's when he'll make mistakes.
I love that Chris and Jensen hit him, he so deserved it. And I love that Jared's making a name for himself and doing well.
Ok, now these are just my very first thoughts and speculations, I could be completely wrong and I honestly can't wait to find out what nasty things you've got up your sleeve. This is going to be one hell of an interesting sequel. *is giddy*
*enormous grin*

Date: 2008-10-29 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Uh huh... Mark is getting a bit unstable...he is going to make mistakes... but not before hehurts them though..
Thank you for you interest, and i pray it wil be interesting for you!

Date: 2008-10-29 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jolinarmalkshur.livejournal.com
Hmmmmmmmmmm, intriguing!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
its on the way now!

Wow

Date: 2008-10-29 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ycorgigirl.livejournal.com
Oh, I am so excited for this. I have loved your last two stories and this sounds great. Can't wait.

Re: Wow

Date: 2008-10-29 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Wow thank you! Chapter one being posted ina few minutes!

Date: 2008-10-29 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueeyedliz.livejournal.com
Yay you posted it!

OMG I'm excited now...thank goodness you're coming back to post more this evening because I don't think the hubby can take my anxious twitching for long, lol.

Mark's such a great villian, just the type of guy I love to hate and I love that he seems to have some evil connections too...

Date: 2008-10-29 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Its on the way babe!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:08 pm (UTC)
ext_37213: (hawaii 5-O)
From: [identity profile] babycin.livejournal.com
Oh dear!! but this man is so evil!
I'm so happy you poste it!! Wait for more and more!!! ♥

Date: 2008-10-29 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yes he is a very evil man! He has completely taken over my story!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelgrainger2.livejournal.com
Oh wow that may have been short but it was scary to think of the lengths that Mark was willing to go to keep the life he has built for himself. The fact he thinks it is OK to try and control Jared scares me because the man doesn't see that Jared is not a threat to him, he just wants to be with Jensen and happy. Mark would be better off just leaving well alone. I am looking forward to more soon

Date: 2008-10-29 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Mark knows no boundaries where Jared is concerned, and by extension Jensen...chapter one on the way in about ten minutes!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
ARRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH
MARK YOU F**KING BASTARD!!!!!!!

Jared you be careful!!

Chris needs to beat Mark again, and make him understand that Jared don`t belong to him, he`s not a slave...

Great start, honey, I hope for more soon;)
♥hugs

Date: 2008-10-29 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Hehehehehe i giggled when i saw your words... I cannot wait to see your reaction to the first chapter! Its on the way in minutes!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I had a very unladylike squeal when I saw this was posted! I am pretty excited to see what you do here. I know how good you are at forking out the hurts to my boys, 'specially Jared :) and nothing I love more than a smart, slightly over the edge villian like Mark. Can't wait. jen

Date: 2008-10-29 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Ooohh i love unldaylike squeels!Means i did something good!! Its on the way in moments!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:27 pm (UTC)
ext_19743: (Default)
From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Mark is definitely a bastard! Great start to the story!

Date: 2008-10-29 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay thank you!!Hows about chapter 1? Its on the way!

Date: 2008-10-29 09:01 pm (UTC)
ext_17010: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
do I spot a mention of JDM? Yay!that will make me very happy :)
I think this is a very cool prologue. Racing off to read chapter one now :D

Date: 2008-10-30 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garvaldmains.livejournal.com
you are just obsessed, not like me and Mags, we are not obsessed with Jared *hips eyes neck ass* at all

Dix
Edited Date: 2008-10-30 04:21 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-30 04:27 pm (UTC)
ext_17010: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha

Awesome typo!!! LJ always knows the truth!

Date: 2008-10-29 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayneeeee911.livejournal.com
I think Pippii worded it best.....right there with you Pipp......we could be on the way to some Markcentric carnage, and he'll deserve every kick in the balls he gets.......

Date: 2008-10-30 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
lmao..... I hope I can provide some good mark carnage.... that is after he has provided some of his own...

Date: 2008-10-29 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvenprincess78.livejournal.com
Ooh! Very intriguing. . .and frightening *looks worried. . . very worried* prologue!! Loved the image of Jensen hitting Mark, while Chris nearly falls off his chair with laughter! Great start!! Now. . off I go to read chapter one!!

:)

Date: 2008-10-30 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay.. glad you like!

Date: 2008-10-30 03:26 am (UTC)
ext_14888: Yummy (Default)
From: [identity profile] angels3.livejournal.com
Fucker!!!!!!!

That's it!

Pondering new plan of disposal will leave message when I have it worked out.

Date: 2008-10-30 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
hehehehehehe thats funny...

Date: 2008-10-30 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garvaldmains.livejournal.com
OMG what a wonderful reaction, i am so proud of you and have no worries if people know i am associated with this fic in any way!

*hugs* Dix

Date: 2008-10-30 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
babe..... I would not be doing this if it werent for you... so on that note.....
Guys!!!! If you hate me for what I do then its all her fault!!!! *points at Di,**

Date: 2008-10-30 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowwolf5.livejournal.com
I really like how you write Mark! He's not just crazy, he's smart. Very dangerous.

Date: 2009-11-22 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yvonnegos.livejournal.com
Uh huh, just setting your way up to hurt Jared some more aren't ya? *giggles* And I love you for it. ;D

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