Release Me

Oct. 28th, 2008 07:28 am
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Title:Release me
Chapter 18/18
Author:[livejournal.com profile] magser 
Pairings:Jared/omc; eventual Jared/ Jensen ; Chris Kane and others
Disclaimer: I'm sorry to say neither of the pretty boys belong to me.....
Rating:NC17
Summary:Jared Padalecki is a good man,trapped in a dead marriage,what happens when he falls in love with someone else?What will he do when forced to choose between the husband he feels he owes and the man who owns his soul?
Word count :1,140
Authors note,: This is completely un-betaed , all mistakes are my own stupid fault! Also just to tell you guys that this fic was inspired by a song, Martina MacBride: Satin Sheets.
Ok this is it guys.... the end of this story and I can tell you I am incredibly nervous that this chapter isnt right....
There is a little note for you guys at the end of this chapter, just to clue you guys in.

 

Three months later

Jensen hummed quietly to himself as he went about putting the final touches to the bar for the party they were throwing that night. This was his last weekend as official owner of this bar, and even though he was going to miss it and the people he had come to know so well, he was so excited for what lay ahead. He had sold the bar to Mike two weeks ago and this was his last hurrah here and they had planned a massive party to finish things on.

Steve was coming down and Chris and he were going to put on a show the patrons wouldn’t soon forget. Jensen grinned in anticipation of the two days ahead, and the fun to be had here in his last hours as owner. Jared and Steve had gotten on amazingly well when they had met almost eight weeks ago and Jensen had been both relieved and excited to have everyone around him and getting on so famously.

His smile softened at the thought of Jared, god how he loved that man. The change in him in the three months they had been together so far had been huge and he honestly couldn’t imagine his life without him in it. Jared had taken time, they had taken time, Jensen had kept his place here, had continued to live here and popped up to Jared when he could and Jared spent alternate weekends here. The people here loved him and were always delighted to see him waiting behind the bar when they walked in, he was always friendly and open and laughing and joking and genuinely loved being behind that bar. He had told Jensen how much it helped, to be able to get back there and relax and chat and work and be around people who knew him and expected nothing from him but a cold beer and a chat.

It hadn’t been easy by any stretch, and it had taken a while to work through the issues that Jared had, and if he was honest he had. But funnily, it was Mark turning up here one night while Jared and Chris were here that had finally closed the door on that life as far as he and Jared were concerned.

Mark had arrived, all softness and soft spoken, sorrow on his face but a coldness in his eyes that had fooled no one, and had oh so prettily begged Jared to return, saying how sorry he was, how he hadn’t meant a word of what he had said, he had been distraught at Jareds unfaithfulness he had said and had handled it badly. Jared had stood in silence, holding Jensen by his side in a tight grip as Mark had spoken, and Jensen had seen how easily he must have been able to fool Jared, for the man was damn good. But he hadn’t reckoned on Jareds new found strength in himself and the love he now had with Jensen and had ordered Mark from the premises in a cold voice that meant business.

It had been obvious Mark had gotten wind of Jareds work with several after schools programmes in  towns stretched across Texas, Jared was developing quite a name for himself and had been approached on a few occasions and asked to put his talents with people to use in the political scene, but he had laughingly and firmly refused. Mark had obviously thought he could get to Jared this way, but he had been oh so wrong and had left empty handed and with a very bruised face and to this day Chris swore Mark had fallen into his fist several times on his way to the car that night....  

But the change in Jared after that had been amazing, it was as if that final meeting with Mark had finally shown him he could do anything, he had recovered and he was a better man than his ex husband would ever be. He had thrown himself with a renewed fire into everything he was involved in, from his work to his family to his relationship and Jensen had been overjoyed. Gone was the cautious man and in his place was.... just...Jared. So when the bar had gone up for sale in San Antonio and Jensen had mentioned it in passing that maybe if the time was right he could go for it and Jared had jumped at it and it had gone from there.

He was now the proud owner of a very fine bar and restaurant in San Antonio, with a very astute manageress in Lucy and chef in Sue, who had both jumped at the chance to get out and away. He and Jared were going to live in the house that came with the bar, and Jared had his family had been spending quite a bit of time there getting everything ready, while he was here finishing up the details on this side.

He was so lost in thought, that he didn’t hear anyone enter the bar until two arms wrapped around him from behind and a mouth nibbled softly on his ear.

‘’Hey there’’ Jareds voice was soft and warm and wrapped around him as tightly as his arms did and Jensen felt himself melt into Jareds embrace.

‘’Hey yourself’’ he replied as Jared turned him in his arms and smiled his beautiful smile and leant down to steal a warm kiss.

‘’Hmmmmm, missed you’’ Jared whispered against his lips as his tongue took to exploring Jensens mouth again and Jensen felt himself respond fast and hard, and Jared noticed and grinned with triumph.

‘’I see you missed me too, how about you and me go upstairs? We got time don’t we Jen?’’ He alternated between words and suckling on Jensens neck to prove his point and Jensen didn’t stand a chance against this type of persuasion and he certainly didn’t want to fight it too hard, but it was always worth a little battle, so he grinned to himself as he tilted his head to give Jared more room, and said.

 ‘’Jay, I dunno, there is such a lot to do here man, and the guys will be here soon...’’

Jareds answering grin was wide and knowing and Jensen knew he fooled no one, but Jared played along anyway and bent to kiss his way back up Jensens throat and before he claimed Jensens mouth again he whispered ...

‘’I want you Jen, I want you in me, please... ‘’ Jensen grinned again and as Jared kissed his smiling mouth Jensen whispered ‘’I love you Jared Padalecki’’

‘’I love you too Jensen Ackles’’

And taking Jared by the hand he led him up the stairs... the guys could wait....

They had all the time in the world.

 

                                The End



A.N.: Umm I dont know if this is ever done, but I do have a sequel in the works, in case you guys are interested, Mark just would not go away! So If you are interested I can show you guys a prologue of sorts into the workings of Marks head?
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Date: 2008-10-28 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
First;)

Date: 2008-10-28 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay for first!

Date: 2008-10-28 07:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
*hugs*
Will I ever be first?

Anyway- I love this as a last chapter, a gorgeous happy ever after... for now ;)
I think this chapter fits in really well wiht the whole story, ties up a lot of the storyline, flows nicely to an end.
It's made me smile :)

So here's a little thank you...
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Edited Date: 2008-10-28 07:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-28 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Awww you will always be first in my book! Thank you for your help and encouragment!

Date: 2008-10-28 07:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] babycin.livejournal.com
Yay!!!!!! LOVE IT !!! LOVE IT!!!!!
LOVE THIS FIC MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE I'VE READ BEFORE!!!!!!*take a deep breath*

Thank you for this dream honey..

and.. YES! Sure!!! I'm so interested in the sequel!

Date: 2008-10-28 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh holy crap wow!Really?? Wow....
And I will post the prologue shortly and you will see...

Date: 2008-10-28 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
♥happy sigh♥
What a sweet happy ending.

"...and to this day Chris swore Mark had fallen into his fist several times on his way to the car that night...."
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I LOVE CHRIS!!!!!!!

This was the perfect ending to this story..I´m sooooooo happy that Lucy and Sue chose to follow Jared away from Mark.
And Jensen and Jared moving in together♥♥

And you better continue that sequel, or I´ll be screaming, begging and crying...and that is NOT a pretty sight;)

Wonderful, wonderful story!!

♥big hugs♥

Date: 2008-10-28 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you sweetheart!I tried so hard to leave it there, but mark is an evil bastard and wont be silenced....

Date: 2008-10-28 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garvaldmains.livejournal.com
Hey you

Damn yes girl post that prologue!!!!

This was a brilliant last chap, flowed brilliantly and finished perfectly...

Well done honey...

*hugs* Dix

Date: 2008-10-28 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thanks babe! Your wonderful encouragement means the world!

Date: 2008-10-28 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Awww that was a perfect ending, especially Jared telling Mark to get out and not being fooled by him.

And this was so sweet

‘’I love you Jared Padalecki’’
‘’I love you too Jensen Ackles’’

And taking Jared by the hand he led him up the stairs... the guys could wait....

They had all the time in the world.


Loved this story, and YES definitely write the sequel, I'll wait here patiently:D

*smishes*

Date: 2008-10-28 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Wow... thank you... i can tell you the sequel is not pretty and umm not what you would expect.... mark is not what you would expect.... but i will post the short prologue shortly.

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Date: 2008-10-28 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueeyedliz.livejournal.com
Loved it Mags, really sweet ending and the idea of a sequel is fab news. I adore the idea of nasty Mark coming back to cause more trouble. Please post the prologue because I'm busting to read it...

*Hugs* and thanks for sharing this story with us. Liz x

Date: 2008-10-28 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thabnks Lizzie!
The sequel has me really nervous... cause its unlike anything i thought i would ever write or even want to write...

Date: 2008-10-28 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alena2b.livejournal.com
siiiiiiiiiiigh! such a great ending! loved this story... kinda fear the sequel though! cause when you hurt them, you hurt them well.

but remember.. i have a penguin!

Date: 2008-10-28 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Someday I will steal that penguin!

Date: 2008-10-28 08:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
Just found this story, and I'm glad that I did! It was such an emotional story, and I'm so glad that things worked out for Jared and Jensen in the end. Mark was (is) a cruel bastard, and I personally think he got off way too easily! I hope he gets what's coming to him in the sequel...so, yes, post the prologue!

Date: 2008-10-28 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you for commenting... and thank you for your words... Mark is a cruel bastard.... he just wont go away...

Date: 2008-10-28 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Great story. I myself would love to see a sequel. :) More of my boys and Chris, sounds awesome and I really loved hating Mark so would totally love to hate him some more...lol.

Date: 2008-10-28 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh believe me sweetheart... I am even scared of mark at this stage... and there is a great chance I will be lynched lol..... what he does is bad bad bad...

Date: 2008-10-28 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowwolf5.livejournal.com
Yes! Sequel! Definitely!
Nice chapter! Guess Mark didn't see that coming, HAH!
Loved this story!

Date: 2008-10-28 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you! And sequel on the way!

Date: 2008-10-28 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexanderjones.livejournal.com
Yesssssssssssss

Just wonderfull, as usual, and nice and sweet...

And yes for the sequel, I had the bad feeling Mark will show up again.

Thanks for everything so far. I've loved it Hon.


Kisses

San

Date: 2008-10-28 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thanks... and thank you for your support allt he way through!
Mark is certainly showing up again...

Date: 2008-10-28 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veiw13.livejournal.com
I loved this story very much and I'm all for a sequel! Thank's for sharing :)

Date: 2008-10-28 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you... and I think I will go ahead with the sequel... its gonna be a toughie though!

Date: 2008-10-28 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
I love how these guys have worked everything out and are building a life together, but HELL YEAH I want MORE!!!
More pain, more suffering, as long as it all ends in Mark getting his due!
Please give us more?

Date: 2008-10-28 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Ummm you could regret asking for more pain and suffering!
Im fighting a losing battle with an evil muse called Mark who wants havoc brought down on those he sees as his enemies...

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Date: 2008-10-29 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amtamburo.livejournal.com
A Sequel... you're writing a sequel?? OMG! I love you so much right now! ~hugs you tight~

I am sorry to see this end... but I LOVE the way you have ended it! I can't wait to see what else you have planned for us and the guys.

~runs away squealing~ "YES... a sequel!!!

Date: 2008-10-29 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Uh huh.. It may not be as long as this one, but I yeah im working on a sequel.....
And thank you for stiking with this, it has really meant a lot, to have you and the winchester teddy bear comment!

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Date: 2008-10-29 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvenprincess78.livejournal.com
Aww!! I'm sad to see this end (at least for now, hehe), but I loved, loved, LOVED this chapter!!! Everything about it! From Jared standing up to Mark, to Chris having a bit of payback, to Lucy and Sue going to work at Jen's new place!! I do however worry very much about this sequel of yours. *looks worried* Hehe, I can't WAIT to read it though!!! So YES!! I'd love to see at least a prologue soon!! *huggles*

:)

Date: 2008-10-29 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you for saying that!Im so glad you liked this chapter i was very nervous about it....
I am posting both the prologue and chapter one this evening...
Let me know what you think!

Date: 2008-10-29 03:53 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] angels3.livejournal.com
Will Mark be mysteriously placed in a chipper/shredder?

Will he perhaps have a run in with a industrial size mulcher?


Maybe a boating accident with an unfortunate motor incident?


Oh wait Chris forgot that was a working guillotine placed there for Halloween and Mark slipped honest.


Loved the ending or maybe not ending?

I love that Jensen sold the bar to Mike and bought one closer to Jared.

Date: 2008-10-29 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Lol I love the scenarios!
I must remember them!
And thank you for your support throughout!

Date: 2008-10-29 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oldbatj.livejournal.com
actually a sequel would be delightful.....hopefully owhere Mark tries to mess with them and winds up eating a huge platter of crow............Thanks for such a nice little tale

Date: 2008-10-29 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Oh I think Mark more than suceeds.... go check it out..

Date: 2008-10-29 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
I greedy

gimme sequel

I wanna see the bastard burn

Date: 2008-10-29 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Lol oh babe.... I will try!

Date: 2008-10-29 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildangel1.livejournal.com
Loved this story, it's definitely one of my favourites. A sequel - yes please!

Date: 2008-10-29 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you saying its one of your favourites! Thats so special to hear!

Date: 2008-10-29 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ala-tariel.livejournal.com
*saves the story and is going to read it tonight*

Date: 2008-10-29 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay!!Im really anxious to know what you think of it!

Date: 2008-10-29 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelgrainger2.livejournal.com
Aw I am so glad there is a sequel to look forward too. I didn't think Mark would go away that easily but I am really glad he got to see how Jared could be without him and that Chris' fist got involved! The ending was just so great too, so pleased they were together in the end. I will miss this but look forward to the sequel.

Date: 2008-10-29 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for saying so!
I hope the sequel lives up to the first one... but then they rarely do huh?Its up now...

Date: 2008-10-29 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayneeeee911.livejournal.com
Great ending......Jared standing up to Mark....atta boy, and Chris, can't help being a hero, even by accident!!!!! and Jen selling up the bar he loved so much for the man he loved even more, loved this story, so sequel = yay

Date: 2008-10-29 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Jared can do it, he is a stronger man than he thinks.... and he is going to need all of that strength!

Date: 2008-10-29 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Enjoyed it, thank you! :-)

Date: 2008-10-29 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay!Thank you sweetie! Hope you will join me or the sequel!

Date: 2008-10-30 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com
I just found the sequel, will be running off to read. But I do have one request, can you link all the chapters to this fic together so I can save to memories :D

Date: 2008-10-30 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Of course I will! I planned on doing it anyway so I will let you know as soon as it is done!

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