Missing

Sep. 30th, 2008 11:38 am
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Title: Missing  5/?
Author: Magser
Word Count:1,121
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: I dont own either of them, shame really
Summary:Jensens world crashes down around him after his lover is reported missing in a foreign country....
Main Pairing : Jensen/Jared ; Chris kane/Camille Soroyan (extra points if you recognise the character) and a few others that will be introduced as i make up the story...
Authors note: This is my first venture into this scary scary world of writing, and i have to thank my wonderful friend </a></b></a>[personal profile] garvaldmains  for her help!I could not do this without this wonderful lady's help and input.
Also from here on in  all mistakes are  mine and mine alone, blame no one but me as it isnt betae'd
Warnings: I think maybe i should have done this before, but i do want to warn of Character death (minor) and in this chapter there are scenes of a violent nature,so if you are sensitive please be careful....


 

Four days, it had been four days since they were taken,

Three days since they had killed Tom,

It was two days ago that it had hit him that Jensen must think he was dead, and Jared thought he was going to lose him mind.

He paced as much as he could in the small cage, his six foot plus frame making the cage uncomfortable and impossible to stand up straight in...

Jensen, Jensen, Jensen...

 His name was like a litany or a prayer he kept muttering to himself...

He had to get back to Jensen...

He pictured his smile constantly, he pictured his wide green eyes and his infectious laugh and the way he watched Jared with that look of pride and silent joy on his face when he thought Jared wasn’t looking... it was all these thoughts and visions in his head that kept him from completely losing it, kept him sane...

Jensen... he had to get home to Jensen ...

His Jacket still sat rolled in a ball in the corner, he refused point blank to put it on again, Tom  had died in that jacket, it had Toms blood all over it. His t shirt and jeans were starting to get looser and hang awkwardly on him as the weight fell off his body, and his face had four days worth of growth on it, giving him a gaunt wild look. He had lost his voice the day before, after screaming blue murder for a solid 24 hours to be set free. He had gone from threats, to begging in a few short hours, Jensen... God he must be destroyed.

He had to get home to Jensen...

After 24 hours of shouting, and going completely hoarse, he had gotten a sound beating from two men for his trouble, and in his weakened state he didn’t have a chance to defend himself against their fists, all he could do was roll into as tight a ball as he could  and protect his head... he Gingerly touched his split swollen lip, he was kinda glad actually he couldn’t see himself right this minute, his lip was bust and swollen, he had a nasty cut over his right eye which he was sure was black , and his cheek on the left side was swollen and sore, and his ribs hurt like a bitch, his lower back was also in considerable pain after  bearing the brunt of the men’s boots.

The lock turned in the door and the door opened slowly, and the same young girl appeared holding some food and water, just as she had done the last two days. She was no more than sixteen years of age, with long dark hair tied back in a braid, and large dark eyes that filled a small face. He didn’t know her name yet, but he would get it he was sure of that, he had taken to talking quietly to the girl, just small things, little things, like his name, about his work, asking her name every time he saw her, she hadn’t answered him yet, but he could tell he was starting to wear her down with his soft words and now that he was hoarse he could see her lean slightly toward the sound of his voice when he spoke.

His chest wheezed noisily as he drew in a deep breath to greet the girl in his soft voice, instead of a hello a deep bark of a cough came out, and his whole frame shook with the force of the coughing fit that followed. Damnit, not now, he couldn’t get sick now, he had to get out of here.

He had to get home to Jensen.

The girl stood off to the side of the cage and waited, watching anxiously as he got his coughing under control...

 ‘I’m ok, its ok... its just a cough, don’t be scared of me, please?’ He whispered hoarsely.

The girl cautiously moved closer and slowly put the drink and bowl of food in through the bars of the cage tilting the bowl slightly to get it in. He made no move to take the food as he continued to try and talk to the girl in front of him

‘Please, can you help me? Can you get me out of here? Please? I wont harm you I promise, I just need to get home, there is someone there waiting for me and he must be going out of his mind, please,  please help me?’ Tears filled his eyes and the girl regarded him silently, then suddenly she spoke softly

‘Maria’

‘Maria is your name?’ Maria nodded slowly; still unsure...Jared leaned toward her anxiously

‘Maria, can you help me? Please? I need to get home... what these men are doing, it’s not right, and they are gonna end up killing me, please Maria ‘

He broke off as his large frame once again was caught up in another coughing fit that left him feeling light headed and weak...

‘You are sick’ she whispered ‘You need to eat, drink, you will feel better...’ 

Jared whispered softly, slowly, making sure to look her straight in the eye ‘You can help me feel better Maria, I don’t belong here, please help me? No one will ever know it was you, just leave a key somewhere or forget to lock the door, I can run fast, I need to get home Maria, I’m going to die here if you don’t help me’

He ended on a gasp as the last of his strength ran out and he fell against the bars of the cage.

Jensen...He had to get home to Jensen.

‘You have kind eyes’ The girl spoke again as if in wonder and Jared blearily opened his eyes and looked at her.. ‘Your eyes are kind, they are beautiful eyes, you don’t hurt anyone do you?’

‘They said you are a bad man, who had killed and maimed many people, said they were keeping you here till someone came to take you to the prison’

‘No Maria, I have not killed anyone, these people are not good people, you have to get out of here, but please, please help me’

One of the men appeared at the door then, and roughly dragged the girl outside, hitting her around the head hard as he did so and screaming at her for delaying and the door slammed and locked behind him... Jared fell back against the bars once again, exhausted and worn...but he felt hope, she had spoken to him, she would help him, he was sure of it...he was going to get out of here.

He was going to get home to Jensen, His Jensen.


Date: 2008-09-30 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
First???
Cool, off to read;)

Date: 2008-09-30 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay!! Hi!!

Date: 2008-09-30 10:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garvaldmains.livejournal.com
dammit pippi

just dammit

Date: 2008-09-30 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Hehehehehehh... you guys made me smile... thank you.. a change from sobbing into my coffee all morning..

Date: 2008-09-30 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garvaldmains.livejournal.com
Hey you, why disappointed, this is fab as usual and my poor poor Jay, bless him...

*hugs* Dix

Date: 2008-09-30 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
*wailes*
Dix hates me:(
*run of and cries in the corner*

Date: 2008-09-30 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mindor.livejournal.com
That's so much better than a lecture about harmonic analysis! (Okay, that's not much of a praise...so I'm happy you're starting to fix them and let's hope Maria will help Jared escape, because if Jensen's convinced Jared's dead, he can't get him out of there.)

Date: 2008-09-30 11:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
thank you.

Date: 2008-09-30 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr, my internet connection had a major breakdown just as I was going to place my comment, sorry^^

This was a sweet heartfelt chapter.
All those emotions going through Jared, poor boy;) *hugs him tight*

But I have faith in Maria, she is going to help him get home to Jensen, right??

♥hugs♥

Date: 2008-09-30 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
You just love to make me cry, don`t you???
Well all my tears will be on your head then;)
I´ll cry my way through your story!!!
♥♥♥

Date: 2008-09-30 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
hehehehehe ... if it helps i have tissues?

Date: 2008-09-30 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippii.livejournal.com
*sniffles*
Ok then;)

Date: 2008-09-30 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelgrainger2.livejournal.com
Aww poor Jared. I am glad the thoughts of Jensen are giving him hope because I wouldn't blame him for just giving up. I wonder if it is a case of mistaken identity saying Jared has killed people or is it a ploy to make Maria scared of him. I hope she helps him get free. Looking forward to more really soon

Date: 2008-09-30 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Jensen is the only thing thats keeping Jared from completely losing his mind..

Date: 2008-09-30 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackpanther07.livejournal.com
She's going to help him right?! she better, he need to get home to his Jensen before Jensen hurts himself. This is heartwrenching, can't wait for the next part.

Date: 2008-09-30 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Im working on it i promise!

Date: 2008-09-30 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Looks like there is a little hope there for Jared with Maria.

Date: 2008-09-30 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Uh huh... a little anyways!

Date: 2008-09-30 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freedom-fly.livejournal.com
He was going to get home to Jensen, His Jensen.
Just so touching...

Date: 2008-09-30 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
thank you!

Date: 2008-09-30 02:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] cream-fudge.livejournal.com
*pets poor Jared*

*waits impatiently for next update...* ;)

Hey magser,
I love your Jared Icon! I wanted to tell you for so damn long, but somehow never managed it.

Date: 2008-09-30 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
hey there!
Thank you hun!

Date: 2008-09-30 02:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
Ooo... a glimmer of hope!
Poor Jared :(

Enjoying this lots :) (Not Jared getting beaten, obviusly, but the unveiling of the plot ;) )

Date: 2008-09-30 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Hey you!
Do you ever go on msn?? lol...

Date: 2008-09-30 04:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellasianna.livejournal.com
LMAo - dude I'm on there all the time... (except tonight cos I'm working late.) But yeah, seriously I am...
I think my screen name at the moment is D'you want to meet a girl I used to know - which, in fairness, may be a little unrecognisable...

Date: 2008-09-30 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Awww poor Jared *pets him* I hope Maria can help him, she's just a kid! but there is a glimpse of hope:)

Great update, can't wait for more:)

Date: 2008-09-30 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thanks for sticking with me!

Date: 2008-09-30 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Of course I'll stick with you!

This story has me hooked, it's really good:)

*smishes*

Date: 2008-09-30 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Awww wow thank you for saying that! Does me the world of good on a day like today.

Date: 2008-09-30 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kes1807.livejournal.com
Awwww sorry you're having a bad day hun!

*hugs you tight*

Date: 2008-09-30 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alena2b.livejournal.com
god... poor jared. you make me feel their pain so much. i'm so happy you got into writing. *passes cookies to di* lol

you describe feelings, situations just perfectly.

and now... fix them!

*squishes*

Date: 2008-09-30 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you sweetie! I will try to fix them i promise!

Date: 2008-09-30 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueeyedliz.livejournal.com
Can't believe I missed yesterday's update. *facepalm*

Anyway this was a great chapter. I really hope Maria helps Jared, I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the power of the dimples will win her over.

'Disappointed'? Hope you're okay?!

(Mrs. TardyMcTardyton) Liz x

Date: 2008-09-30 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thanks liz... i will be....i hope lol...

Date: 2008-09-30 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com
OMG!

JARED'S ALIVE!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!

Hurry up and reunite the boys!!

Please???

*puppy dog look*

Date: 2008-09-30 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Yay, and im working on it hun, i promise i will try!

Date: 2008-09-30 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com
Okay, good! XD

Date: 2008-10-01 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayneeeee911.livejournal.com
I love Jared's thoughts, they're not 'I have to get out, I don't want to die' they're 'he had to get home to Jensen' so Jen would be ok.

Date: 2008-10-01 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Next chapter is up...

Date: 2009-01-08 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennygeee.livejournal.com
Maybe Maria will help Jared :o)

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