Wonderful chapter. I loved the opening paragraph and Jared’s quiet appearance. I am loving how the two trees are tying in to the story and have an idea that they may be even more important then we first think but I also may be wrong... which is most likely. Lol. I think of everything in this story... I have the clearest image of that spot, with the trees and I can hear the heartbreaking crying of Jared's ghost in my head. It's so hauntingly sad and beautiful at the same time. I’m sorry this story is kicking your rear. I know what it’s like to get to a point in something you’re creating to where you are so frustrated that you just want to burn it while you laugh and dance a happy Snoopy dance around the ashes. LOLOL But my dear and I hope that you don’t mind my saying, that I think you are being too hard on yourself. You may be too close to it right now to see it but it is shaping up very nicely. I do hope it gets easier for you though. jen
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Date: 2009-09-13 09:09 am (UTC)I think of everything in this story... I have the clearest image of that spot, with the trees and I can hear the heartbreaking crying of Jared's ghost in my head. It's so hauntingly sad and beautiful at the same time.
I’m sorry this story is kicking your rear. I know what it’s like to get to a point in something you’re creating to where you are so frustrated that you just want to burn it while you laugh and dance a happy Snoopy dance around the ashes. LOLOL But my dear and I hope that you don’t mind my saying, that I think you are being too hard on yourself. You may be too close to it right now to see it but it is shaping up very nicely. I do hope it gets easier for you though. jen