Perfect babe. Absolutely perfect. You really nailed it - reading it I could feel Jared's pain and confusion, his desperation to regain control of his life and his need to be away from all the memories if even for just a bit. You know how I feel about Jensen - I could feel his anger, hurt, betrayal and desperation.
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Date: 2009-05-25 02:12 pm (UTC)Wonderful job.