Date: 2009-03-22 09:37 am (UTC)
I love a good cliffhanger, I surely do
I also have to say...I love your dialogue. I have a thing for dialogue and you hit it. It flows so naturally. Very distinct voices per character and your plot is scurry and gripping.
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